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This weekend, I had the opportunity to there NN(X) be able to attend Lollapalooza, a mega-event that I NN(X) SM(was) realize WTWW(done)for the first time in Chile. The great quantity of national and international artists who could be seen turns WF(turned)it into a very good experience. This I WW(was) realize WF(done) in the NN(X) ParqueO'Higgins on Sunday there was appearing Kanye West, who is one of the artists seize influential in the musical current panorama, it WF(she) has WF(have) discs best-sellers, and many prizes, beside producing music and letters for other big artists. Kanye West present at nine o'clock in the night in the COCA-COLA ZERO STAGE and his presentation showed recent of this great artist, and some of his better successes.
Also they WF(It was) presented bands as 30 Seconds to Mars, The Flaming Lips, 311, Mala Rodríguez, Jame's Addiction, Sublime, Chico Trujillo, all they WO(they all) very good these ones, the good of this great spectacle is that there was bands to which it did not know and WO(I like very much) his music I like me very muchNN(X) …
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This weekend, I had the opportunity to be able to attend Lollapalooza, a mega-event that was done for the first time in Chile. The great quantity of national and international artists who could be seen turned it into a very good experience. This was done in ParqueO'Higgins on Sunday there was appearing Kanye West, who is one of the artists seize influential in the musical current panorama, He have discs best-sellers, and many prizes, beside producing music and letters for other big artists. Kanye West present at nine o'clock in the night in the COCA-COLA ZERO STAGE and his presentation showed recent of this great artist, and some of his better successes.
Also It was presented bands as 30 Seconds to Mars, The Flaming Lips, 311, Mala Rodríguez, Jame's Addiction, Sublime, Chico Trujillo, they all very good these ones, the good of this great spectacle is that there was bands to which it did not know and I like very much…
What they might impoved for the versions that came from this festival the topic was TECH STAGE that was locating in La Cupula’s theatre of the same park and to which there was no space for so many people, wich provoked a closure on the part of police for the great multitude that wanted see to Devendra Banhart